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I can't make you happy anymore.

My life was devoted
To making everyone happy.
Now I've done the opposite,
And I can't fix everything anymore.

The puddle of blood is growing around me

I'm so sorry
That I can't save everyone.
But right now
I can't even save myself.

I hold his present to my chest- the bracelet is slowly becoming stained red

It doesn't hurt anymore.
Each cut for each person
I was unable to help,
To save.

Everything has a blurry haze to it now. . .The tears on my cheeks belong to the living being I used to be. Each drop holds the life I'm letting go.

A shard of my breaking heart and spirit.


Now all I can do is say
Goodbye. . .

And hope that when I'm gone. . .

I'll finally have made you all happy. . .


Because the blood and tears won't ever stop now.
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Bunnairry Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is very well written
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IveDiedInside Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you
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jonasbrosfan123 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011  Student General Artist
woah. this is like dejavu. this is something a lot like a poem i wrote, i just have to remeber when i did so...
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IveDiedInside Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh
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jonasbrosfan123 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Student General Artist
it aint ur fault! its just the idea is sorta the same!
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IveDiedInside Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
. . .
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jonasbrosfan123 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Student General Artist
i'll shut up now...
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IveDiedInside Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
No! -Cling- >.<
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:iconjonasbrosfan123:
jonasbrosfan123 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Student General Artist
erm...did u see my newest writing?
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IveDiedInside Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I'll check it out right now
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